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Gazelle Boy has weathered hands for
shaking trees and giving race to the jeep.

Treeless Savannah, she gave birth to a
feral child. Outran a helicopter, leaping.
Mighty feathered hair, aerodynamic toes.

Wild child; too fast even for the bear trap to snap.

Men aren't built for the animal kingdom;
we eat with god damn knives and forks.
Civilized and spoken for.

Kissing our children, waiting for
the leopards to lick their bones.
:iconbatmanonrobin:

Author's Comments

Based upon an article I read
a while ago about a feral child.

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:iconyouinventedme:
Men aren't built for the animal kingdom;
we eat with god damn knives and forks.
Civilized and spoken for.

Kissing our children, waiting for
the leopards to lick their bones.


outstanding

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconjust-l00kin:
It...
WOW. Just WOW.


--
I have to write like my heart needs to beat.
:iconetre-aime:
this reminded me of the poisonwood bible in a sense. and i like that. =]
:iconcarousel-dreams:
This is lovely
Not sure if this is on purpose or by accident but isn't it too not to? (third stanza)

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so pregnant with meaning i am lactating not really
:iconthetaoofchaos:
great all the way around.

i especially like:

"Wild child; to fast even for the bear trap to snap"

(though i think you meant "too" instead of "to").

it has a dynamic groove.

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconblue-pixies:
the last to lines are astonishing

--
i found you
... but lost myself along the way

*project-improve
:iconthewhaleswimsbig:
4th stanza is impressive. Well done
:iconohsostarryeyed:
i quite like the ending :heart:

[p.s. "Wild child; to fast even for the bear trap to snap." is that "too fast," not "to fast?"]

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.

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