Gazelle Boy has weathered hands for
shaking trees and giving race to the jeep.
Treeless Savannah, she gave birth to a
feral child. Outran a helicopter, leaping.
Mighty feathered hair, aerodynamic toes.
Wild child; too fast even for the bear trap to snap.
Men aren't built for the animal kingdom;
we eat with god damn knives and forks.
Civilized and spoken for.
Kissing our children, waiting for
the leopards to lick their bones.














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we eat with god damn knives and forks.
Civilized and spoken for.
Kissing our children, waiting for
the leopards to lick their bones.
outstanding
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an antique arms and armor expert
WOW. Just WOW.
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I have to write like my heart needs to beat.
Not sure if this is on purpose or by accident but isn't it too not to? (third stanza)
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so pregnant with meaning i am lactating not really
i especially like:
"Wild child; to fast even for the bear trap to snap"
(though i think you meant "too" instead of "to").
it has a dynamic groove.
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The world is an eraser for these words
- Jack Kerouac
we must destroy that which contains us
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i found you
*project-improve
[p.s. "Wild child; to fast even for the bear trap to snap." is that "too fast," not "to fast?"]
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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
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